MOVING WRITERS FROM THE
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Inspiring
Resources to Keep Your Creativity Flowing
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Ready for spring? We are. We hope this issue of "Moving Muse" gives
you - writer, artist, journaler, cook, all-around creative being - vital
resources for deepening your connection to earth and to others.
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"Tracking Wonder" and "Earth Writer" Tips
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A new "Muse It" forum for your writing
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Inspiring quotations & reading suggestions
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And lots of brand new courses, retreats, and workshops
Block Island. Connecticut. Taos. The Hudson Valley. Cape Cod.
Here we come! -Jeff
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Tracking
Wonder & Earth Writer Tips

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Rather than sit down to write with a focus on, "What do I have to
say or to write?" try stepping outdoors and saying, "What is asking
to be said or to be written?" Then listen.
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Make a random mark on a page. Then center yourself & take stock of
where you are at this moment in relation to this building and to
this part of the planet. With this awareness, make a mark. Then
step outdoors and listen to something outside of yourself. With
this awareness, make a mark. Observe any differences - without
judgment - in your marks. Then decide if awareness outside of
yourself might alter your creative tracks on the page.
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Write like a
butterfly. Write like a bee.
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Use both sides of
your rough drafts for print-outs.
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Watch a stream,
steady and yielding. Write likewise.
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Don’t take yourself
too seriously or too lightly. Earth’s constant shifts remind us
we won’t be here forever.
Coaching Tip:
Feel the Verve of Your Words
Words on the page can have verve. "Verve" is the vitality and energy
that often give written words voice. Where there's verve, we the
writers and the readers feel connected.
The words have blood. They're alive, we might say. In Sanskrit, we
call this quality of body, mind, and imagination virya.
Sometimes, though, no verve, no voice. No voice, no connection. Just a
string of words routinely rout on the page's blank lake. We might
randomly cast words somewhere out there hoping something will catch.
Chances are, little will.
You might reread something you've written and hear sentences or whole
sections that lack energy. "I don't feel connected to the words here,"
some writers tell me. If you don't feel connected to your words, your
readers likely won't, either. What to do?
Each writer, each situation differs, of
course. But based on my own experiences as well as my work with
numerous writers with variations of "verve ailments," I'll offer these
suggestions for when you think parts of your writing or your writing in
general lacks vitality.
* If a story's narration falls flat on the
ears, walk the voice.
I asked one fiction writer-client recently to walk in the rhythms of his
narrator. I knew the client walked his dog each morning, so while doing
so he would imagine being in his main character's body and feel the
rhythms of his character's physical and mental and emotional movements.
The idea was to shake the client loose of engrained syntactical
patterns. It's starting to work. his drafts have voice where once there
was little. If a writer lacks fluidity with the ways words can string
together tiny symphonies in sentences, then his writing's vitality
almost inevitably will wane.
* Read the section or a whole piece aloud.
Doing so can help you hear how stuffed certain
sentences can become or where a train of long sentences needs a compact
one to break the tempo.
* When you draft,
try tending to sound as much as sense.
Doing so can lead temporarily to overwriting that sounds like a school
kid who's just discovered alliteration, but doing so also can remind you
that words' sense hinge as much if not more so on sound than on semantic
reference.
* Treat writing - and rewriting - words on
the page as an experience. Too often,
writers whose words lack verve think that "their" words' job is to
convey some memory or to translate some internal experience or emotion.
That attitude suggests that writing itself is not an immediate
experience, only a secondary act trying to imitate best it can the
"original" experience. We wonder, then, How do writers "recreate"
the feeling of that memory or experience? They don't. They don't
try to "recreate" anything. They create something new right
there on the page. That is, when they write, they tend so readily to
the dance of imagination and words as fingers peck the keys and as
respiration keeps the fleshy machine moving that the moment of writing
itself - even if the "subject" ostensibly is a high school memory -
becomes an experience. When writing itself becomes an experience,
regardless of subject, then verve more likely will visit.
* YOGA AS MUSE: FEEL THE VERVE OF YOUR WORDS
- Center yourself and set the intention
to write with verve. You might have a particular subject or scene or
character or memory with which you're working, but your aim is to treat
writing as a vital experience. Move in your body with vitality, with
virya. Sun salutations, exhilarating back arches, or even a few
forward bends attentively executed can help you feel vigor pulse in your
muscles. Imagine your body as the body of work, the body of words. Ten
minutes, no more. With your fingers literally pulsing, begin writing
into the most salient concrete image. Listen to the sounds and cadences
of words and phrases that ebb and flow, and for now don't pin in the
playfulness. Let the words' energy carry you instead of you trying to
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YAM
Practitioners Write: "Muse It" Forum
We're launching a new forum called "Muse It" hat will publish your
musings at
www.centertopage.com/museit.html.
"Muse It"
will publish your responses to themes we pose each month. You can
respond to the questions we pose or not, but do focus on the theme.
I"Muse It" will allow us to share ideas, insights, and reflections with
one another. We will post your writing, a brief bio, the city or hamlet
where you live, and your email address so others can contact you. We're
not seeking "literature," per se, in this forum. Just a mode to share &
communicate.
The guidelines are simple.
Email submissions of 500 words or less focused on our topic of the
month to
ron@centertopage.com.
Clarify which theme you're responding to. Keep submission within email
textbox. No attachments. Include a two-sentence bio, email address,
and location where you live. We reserve the right to edit for length.
"Muse
It"
Theme for April: Earth & Writing:
What do you do to remind yourself as a writer or artist to connect to
the natural world? How does the natural world inform your creativity
even if you spend most of your days in subways and offices? What yoga
tools connect you and your creativity to the natural world? Send us
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Possible
YAM Online Listserv Forum
We've had requests from around the country to resurrect the YAM Listserv
so you can further network, share ideas, and even form regional YAM
groups. If you'd be willing to help us design and moderate such a
listserv, let us know. Perhaps we can work out some simple trade.
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Jeff's Reflections:
Writing as an Act of Earth
I recently returned from
Taos where I led some talented, authentic writers through a week's
retreat. If a retreat is the soul's winter, then
to be in the world, fully and whole, must be the soul's spring.
Earth around here had its deep slumber, however briefly, but most of
the snow from last week's blizzard already has receded beneath the
soil and back to sky. Earth prepares us.
I'm
ready.
Thank goodness for
Yoga.
Yoga, simply put, is a way to be in this physical world and in this
creative body with full faculties, wits, and spirit.
Yoga awakens intuition, imagination, and other subtler facets
of mind. When these faculties arise over the
mind's machinations, we may be more likely to feel a thawing pond's
surge as it cracks its layers or to heed a hawk's swoop as it passes
over traffic. In these ways, Yoga also fine
tunes our relationship to earth.
As
writers, as creative beings, we might do well to refine this
integral connection. For what is writing's
source but in our ancient interactions with this natural world of
matter and spirit?
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Writing as Wen
What
would writing as "wen" feel like?
"Wen,"
a Chinese way, a term, relates to paw prints in the sand, to the
tracks birds make in air on a spring evening, to the way stars line
up and the way clouds cross their paths on a winter night.
"Wen" relates, too, to how we read these marks and tracks.
And "Wen" also references the act of writing itself.
How
is writing, with no mysterious or mystical overtones, simply part
and parcel of what earth does each day and night?
"A,"
the triangular alpha shape that arrows toward the sky, likely stems
from a human's pictographic representation of an ox head.
"M," that mountain-like wavy form that comes smack in the
alphabet's middle, stems from an early human representation of
water.
These letters, part of the writer's implicit medium, come from our
imagination's engagement with earth, with the physical world.
It's so simple, so obvious that these marks should have their
history in this relationship where imagination grooves with earth's
things. Still, that fact fascinates me.
It also has led to a few years' worth of wondering how the
act of writing itself is part and parcel of what earth does.
3,800-year-old pictographs recently discovered and deciphered in a
cave near what was ancient Thebes, these marks likely designated a
hired Semitic assassin's rank, name, and prayer to a deity. Our
medium's earliest markings - inscriptions on cave walls that
supplicate our connection to what is and our affirmation, "I was
here."
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Earth, Wonder, Writing Quotations
"Not to live in the physical world is the greatest poverty."
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Wallace Stevens
"Like imagination and the body, language rises unbidden. . .
.Language is learned in the house and in the fields, not at
school.. . . "
-Gary Snyder, The Practices of the Wild
"Certainly all my favorite writers have retained
their attitude of wonder. And I think this matters to me
most about writing, beyond history and politics, plot
and structure, the literal and the symbolic. Of course one
wants all those things, too. But there is
something much more primitive and simple and elusive that
lies at the core of writing that has to do with
the sheer mystery of the created world. For me it
is what links a cave painting to a page of Ulysses.”
-Jonathan Rosen, The New York Times
“Also, I am learning that writing is a long journey. Even
in these times of modern travel, a journey can be full
of surprises, unpredictable and
fraught with danger. Delays, handicaps, deceptive
companions, and tantalizing distractions. One’s
mettle is sorely tested in this process.”
Sindiwe Magona, “Clawing at Stones”
“To find yourself, look outside yourself.”
–Marvin Bell
"Do you remember how marvelous a stranger’s house smelled
when you were small? That’s another mark of
genius, the senses are keenly and finely
tuned. How to hold on to that native genius and also learn
the things we need to know to survive.
How to hold on to the breadth of genius and still narrow it
down enough to concentrate on one piece of
work. How not to allow the narrowing to become more
important than the whole. These are big
problems. I’m thinking about
them all the time. How not to let the world de-genius us,
our children and our grandchildren and our
friends.”
-Ellen Gilchrist, Falling through space
“Genius is the capacity to retrieve childhood at will.”
-Charles Baudelaire in an essay on modern art in the late
1800s
“[W]hat allows genius to flower is not neurosis, but its
opposite, ‘ego strength,’ meaning (among other things)
ordinary, Sunday-school virtues such as tenacity and
above all the ability to survive disappointment.”
Joan Acocella, Twenty-Eight Artists and Two Saints
"Metaphor is genius.”
– Aristotle, Poetics
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Center To
Page Book Picks
Twenty-Eight Artists and Two Saints
(Pantheon 2007) by Joan Acocella.
At last an intelligent series of
biographical essays of artists that collectively challenge
the image of the brilliant artist as a neurotic basket-case.
There are a few such artist portraits in this
collection, granted. Yet, Acocella's practical, perceptive
account for the role that fortitude and "the ability to be
disappointed" play in the creative life are worth the price
alone of this volume. And I quite like a
collection that puts Mary Magdalene in with Susan Sontag.
Catching the
Big Fish: Creativity, Meditation, and Consciousness
(Tarcher 2006) by David Lynch. The maker of such
eerie flicks as Blue Velvet and Eraserhead
offers a few simple, sometimes illuminating meditations on
how his 32 years of Transcendental Meditation have aided him
in netting the "big" creative ideas. Lynch's metaphors of
the pond and fish help us us understand layers of
consciousness, but the book is otherwise slim on
practicalities.
The Human Touch: Our
Part in the Creation of the Universe
(Metropolitan Books 2007) by Michael Frayn. This
playwright and novelist turns his attention to
matters philosophical. I've barely cracked the cover on
this promising volume.
Contemplative
Science: Where Buddhism and Neuroscience Converge
(Columbia UP 2007) by Alan B. Wallace. So far,
the first two chapters offer a fairly useful argument
for why subjective studies of consciousness with
Buddhism's rigor should be included in
"scientific" studies of consciousness. Wallace's
argument should be useful for the slew
of new branches of Western
psychology, archaeology, phenomenology, and neurology
whose practitioners increasingly are
investigating other states of consciousness besides
Freudian neurosis.
The Tibetan Yogas of
Dream and Sleep
(Snow Lion 1998) by Tenzin Wangyal Rinpoche.
As part of my tracking wonder in the night
world, this book illuminates in fairly clear language some
"dream practices" I have been trying for
several weeks. It's aiding my ongoing study of
how the waking world and dream world converge and
communicate. One role, as creative beings,
might be for us to learn more about navigating dreams at
noon and waking at midnight.
Tooth and Claw
(Penguin 2005). T. C. Boyle. One of my clients, who studied
with Boyle, turned me on to this brilliant
collection of short stories.
In many of the
stories, Boyle exhibits qualities of writers I admire:
embodied compassion that allows him to give voice to
a variety of characters; embodied syntax and organic if not
wild metaphor; a natural construction of
scene and narrative arc; surprising phrasing that does not
get in the writing’s way.
The Dying of the Trees
(Penguin 1995). Charles E.
Little. I read passages from this book intermittently to
help me communicate to the ailing spruce,
maple, and willow on our land. One role, as creative
beings, is for us to keep attuned to the
more-than-human languages around us.
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JOIN THE WONDER: Upcoming Events
Block Island Poetry Project:
Earth Tongue,
Earth Medicine, Earth Stories, April 12-15, 2007 REGISTER NOW
Connecticut:
Yoga of Writing
with Wonder Weekend, April 27-28, 2007
Hudson Valley:
Creative Feast: A Cooking & Writing Adventure, June 16 BRAND
NEW for OUR INNER CHEFS
Hudson Valley: WEN
Barn & Farmhouse Workshop & Class Series: May-August, October
Taos Writers Conference:
Borderlands: Writing, Yoga, Consciousness, July 8-13, 2007
Cape Cod Writers Conference:
The Yoga
of Writing with Wonder: From Inspiration to Re-vision, August
24-28, 2007
Gratitude
Your enthusiasm, courage,
and utter tenacity to create with authenticity keep us at Center To
Page moving.
Thank you. Stay in touch, Jeff
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